Sunday, February 3, 2013
太陽はどこ - OKAMOTO'S
Where's the Sun? - Okamoto's
No, I don't have a reason [1]
I was walking down the street
No, I don't have a reason
Towards your house
Look, you can see it now—that nostalgic scenery
the crescent moon suspended in the night [2]
Where's the sun, where's the sun
that we used to be able to see back then
Where's the sun, where's the sun
that set for good over there [3]
"Whatever's fine"
Even though I want to think that
No matter what I do
Nothing ever works out for me and
I'll never ever get used
to being cold in the dark, to you not being there
Where's the sun, where's the sun?
that was smiling down on us back then
Where's the sun, where's the sun?
If you were here now I could probably show you the kindness you deserve [4]
Where's the sun, where's the sun?
that we used to be able to see back then
Where's the sun, where's the sun?
that set for good over there
Where's the sun, where's the sun?
that was smiling down on us back then
Has the world stopped turning?
Where's the sun?
Notes:
[1] I angsted about how to best express the なんて here. Alternatives included "No particular reason" (which felt too glib) and "There's no point" (which felt too different).
[2] I didn't really get the image here. In English the moon would not "sway" I don't think. I considered going with "floating" cuz that seems poetically natural, but I dunno, I like suspended. "in the night" I added because it needed somewhere to be suspended.
[3] This "over there" is pretty wishy-washy, but it's what they said and I kept it mainly because it parallels the "back then." Some vague "other" time and place. I think that seems valid. My alt would have been "on that horizon."
[4] This line I basically rewrote based on how I read it. The literal translation is something like, "If it were now, [subject omitted] should be able to do it kindly [or "make it kind/nice/friendly"]. So yeah, I read this as him feeling guilty for their break-up, and that if it were the him of today (who is more mature), he could have done it right [by being nicer to her].
Wednesday, September 5, 2012
まじないの唄 - OKAMOTO'S
Song of Charms [1]
Hey hey everybody, come on over
I'm not such a sketchy guy
I'll tell your fortune, I'll tell your fortune
I'll tell you your future
Put on a glittering ring
C'mere, I'll show you the way
C'mere, c'mere
Let's dance until the tomorrow we're all so excited about
Swing your hips, stomp your feet [2]
I'll play the fool for you
Leave it all, leave it all
to the tarot cards
Hey hey everybody, come on over
I'm not such a sketchy guy
I'll tell your fortune, I'll tell your fortune
Just like this, just like this, I'll take you along
Notes:
[1] Considered "Magic Song" but there is no charm to that lol "Incantation" is hard to fit. This was the hardest part of the song. Not sure "charms" is that good either. Honestly I think the title of the song is just a bit weird, but anyhow!!
[2] Subject is actually unclear. This verse is sort of hazy to me.
Thursday, April 26, 2012
Hello I Love You - Okamoto's
Hello I Love You - Okamoto's
A boy is chasing a dream and a ball
His big brother is off chasing some girl's butt
A salaryman in a suit being rocked in a crowded train, clickity-clack
Whether you're laughing or crying, you only get one shot [1]
A tough spot is the beginning of an opportunity [2]
If you take the first step, everything is yours
The first step, then another big step
Hello, hello I love you
A CEO who just finished reading the newspaper on the top floor of his building
Heroes often show up late
Wanting to be admired by someone [3]
If you take the first step, everything is yours
The first step, then another big step
Hello, hello I love you
The first step, it goes on day by day
Everyday anew
like this till forever [4]
Hello, hello I love you
Notes:
[1] Sorry, I sort of made up the "whether" part of this, but I had a hunch. Hope it was right lol
[2] Didn't really feel like a "chance" begins in English. "Opportunity" felt more like it could...
[3] This line took a while, but I realized if you read it as the front of the previous line (or middle, whatever) then it sort of made sense...as...that!
[4] Took a bold step there. Uhhh that どこまでも is a really tricky thing.
HELLO HELLO I LOVE YOU! :D
Sunday, November 20, 2011
あの娘ぼくが使ったらどんな音するんだろう ー OKAMOTO'S
What sound would that girl make if I used her? - OKAMOTO'S [1]
To me it's still too soon, my hands just won't reach
There's nothing I can do about that, always through the glass
even just looking is great
You know, but you know, sometime I'm sure…
I'll come back here, for at least a glance [2]
If I grow up, if I get rich
I'll take you away from here
That's how it'd be if it were up to me, but my lover is...
A Galaxy or a Vistalite Original…
I can't narrow down to just one I like—you and you and you
So cute, on the smallish side
but very well put together, I'm just here longing to
work you out [3]
Actually, you're quite a bit older, such a vet [4]
Sparkles, a little bit of pink. Cuz you're so fancy.
I won't put you to sleep. I'll be tuning you up and down till morning.
A Galaxy or a Vistalite Original
I can't narrow it down to just one I like—you and you and you

Notes
[1] Title is still awk...but...seems ok?
[2] This line tripped me up a bit at the end...
[3] Maybe too loose here. Was not 100% sure on the meaning even so I kind fudged it into...well, what is there.
[4] Really could not decide who this was referring to, but I went with her cuz I think the drumsets he is singing about were designed in the 70s and these kids are only just turning 21. That said, the 実は makes it sound kind of like a personal confession; I think that is what is throwing me off. Is he confessing to the listener? ;(
Friday, November 18, 2011
アイのテーマ - OKAMOTO'S
アイのテーマ
Love Theme - OKAMOTO'S
♯1919で「イクイク」 ♯1818で「イヤイヤ」
なんだ簡単な暗号 なんか秘密の暗号
#1919 means yes, #1818 means no
What's with this simple code, some secret code
So, he sings #1919 as いちきゅういちきゅう but you can also read it as いくいく which in its most simplest form could just be translated as yes (for these lyrics that is how I would translate it). #1818 is いちはちいちはち but also read as いやいや (no).
エービーシーディーイーエフジーエイチ
エービーシーディーイーエフジーエーイチ
A B C D E F G H
A B C D E F G H
次は
Next comes
アイーアイーアイー そっか「燥」だな
アイーアイーアイー やっぱ「愛」だな
アイーアイーアイー 「曖昧」「身」「満員」
アイーアイーアイー だって「僧」だろ?
Love love love Yeah, I think that's right
Love love love Must be 'love' right?
Love love love 'I' 'My' 'Me' 'My'
It's probably love love love after all
This is really the roughest translation imaginable and does not catch any of the fun of the original version. Basically he's using all the kanji in brackets there, plus the letter "I" as homophone code, i.e. taking only the sounds as meaning. If you wanted to translate it using the meanings of the kanji instead of the readings, you could probably get away with something like:
I I I Yeah, so dried up.
I I I Must be love, right?
I I I Vague, self, no vacancy
Probably I I I'm a monk after all
Haha, but that is awful and not what the song is about at all ;)
グズグズしてる間に 夕暮れカラスが鳴いている アホー
While I'm hesitating, an evening crow is cawing me stupid
CHECK IT OUT GUYS I MADE A PUN hahaha 'cawing' - 'calling' GET IT?
In Japanese it's a pun because あほ means 'stupid,' but apparently it is also the sound this crow makes.
「k」と「g」だとキログラムで 「m」が2つでミリメーター
どんな単位で測っても こいつは測定不能さ
'k' and 'g' make kilogram and two 'm's is a millimeter
but no matter what unit you measure in, it's impossible to gauge this one
エービーシーディーイーエフジーエイチ
アイジェーケーエルエムエヌオーピー
キューアールエスティーユーブゥイダブリュエックスワーイジー Z!
からの
アイーアイーアイー どんな「時間」でも
アイーアイーアイー やっぱ「哀」だな
アイーアイーアイー その「瞳」には
アイーアイーアイー 「何」が見えるの?
The 'I' from
A B C D E F G H
I J K L M N O P
Q R S T U V W X Y Z!
love love Anytime
Love love love That must be it, huh
Love love love What can you see
Love love love in those eyes?
So this part was actually a little weird, since the からの indicates that the 'Love love love' is from the alphabet cuz it's actually 'I' [blah blah blah]. I think the way I said it is ok. In this one the kanji seem to actually have the meaning they intended as opposed to puns...at the end, ひとみ and なに...
手のひら睨み付け 考えるフリをしてるだけ アホー
Scowling at the palm of my hand, only pretending to think—stupid!
エービーシーディーイーエフジーエイチ…
A B C D E F G H...
アイーアイーアイー そっか「燥」だな
アイーアイーアイー やっぱ「愛」だな
アイーアイーアイー どんな「時間」でも
アイーアイーアイー やっぱ「哀愛」
Love love love Yeah, I think that's right
Love love love Must be "love" right?
Love love love Anytime
Love love love Must be love, love
気づいた瞬間 頭の電球光り出す ィアッホー
The moment I realize, the light bulb above my head goes on—stupid!
欲望を叫べ!!!! - OKAMOTO'S
And here are the lyrics in Japanese!
Shout Your Desire!!!! - OKAMOTO'S
Yeah yeah yeah listen to my heart beat! [1]
Dance Dance Dance to you
Just Just Just to you
cuz we're tied together with a red thread.
Somebody is cheating on somebody, ouch! Is that ok?
Not for me! I'm not messing with you!
The dirty pretty glittering sky, can you see it too?
Let's try to climb to the top of the Tower of the Sun [3]
It's all about, "Don't think, just feel!"
C'mon! My heart is jumpin'—I'm right on the edge [4]
Yeah yeah yeah listen to my heart beat!
Yeah yeah yeah there's nothing pointless about love!
Dive Dive Dive in you
Birth Birth Birth feelin' good
People are always telling me no for no reason. I wanna do it, I can't hold back anymore
Have you ever loved and been loved intensely?
What is gonna happen to the connection between us?
C'mon! My heart is jumping'—I'm right on the edge!
Yeah yeah yeah Listen to my heart beat!
Yeah yeah yeah! there's nothing pointless about love! that's right, isn't it?
Yeah yeah yeah Listen to my heart beat
Yeah yeah yeah There's nothing pointless about love!
Yeah yeah yeah Listen to my heart beat
Yeah yeah yeah There's nothing pointless about love!
Yeah yeah yeah!
Notes:
[1] More literally this is a sound effect, but it just doesn't sound cool in English. Not that "Listen to my heart beat" is that cool, but I think it gets the feel across better than something corny like "thumpity thump thump thump" ;P
[2] Having trouble with the second part of this line. The way I read it was...ばかにするんじゃない。Which...yeah I'm honestly just not sure. I was thinking of saying something like, "Don't give me that bullshit" but I don't know what really gets closer...'n clearly I am not quite sure who the subject is :(
[3] Yeah, the Tower of the Sun is a real place. You can read more about why it's important to the band in this interview from a last summer that I translated.
[4] This is another one where I replaced some sound/effect. I like it :3 I mean I think the end part of being right on the edge could have been done as, "I'm about to boil over," but I'm not sure if they really meant that imagery when they used バチバチ. Seems more abstract in this case?
手紙 - OKAMOTO'S
Here's the Japanese.
Letter - OKAMOTO'S
Hey, my desire, where has it gone?
Hey, my desire, show me it clearly
For some reason the things I want have gotten blurry since some time ago
Again the day will end, unable to get satisfied
Hey, I wonder where all the treasures I gathered long ago got thrown away?
I look into the marbles, but the sparkle from back then
has gone cloudy. I can't find it [1]
I go into a convenience store and stand there reading magazines
Turn the page, turn the page, turn the page, it's nowhere, nowhere
Hey, the four of us talked all night long. Do you remember that night?
We could tell the season was changing from the smell of the wind
Unfortunately there wasn't a moon, but
we continued talking about our dreams, blushing a little
The dream I saw after waking from a dream
Where is it, where is it…in that cloud
My Cloudy Heart My Cloudy Heart
My Cloudy Heart My Cloudy Heart
Hey, If I look back sometime,
Hey, will the haze in my heart disappear?
My Cloudy Heart My Cloudy Heart
My Cloudy Heart My Cloudy Heart
Notes:
[1] The only major seeming translation 'change' I made was this "I can't find it" which is literally, "It won't be found?" No one would ever say that in English that I can think of, and certainly not in this situation.
Friday, August 19, 2011
OKAMOTO'S Power Push Interview
I was working on this for a pretty long time, but took a big break in the middle. Finally finished it this morning. It's obviously not perfect, but I learned a lot about my favorite band during the process and some parts came out ok! :D I'm pretty sure it's the longest thing I've ever attempted to translate in full. Here is the original Japanese from Natalie Music. Not sure what else to say, so...hope someone finds this interesting!
Power Push OKAMOTO'S
Seize the moment and shout your desire! An ambitious work that opens a new door.
The OKAMOTO'S released their first single, "Shout Your Desire!!!!" This song commemorates the 100th birthday of Taro Okamoto (the origin of the band's name) and sets the pace for their new album, "Desire," to be released September 7th. Focusing on the single and album, we were brought closer to the OKAMOTO's right NOW, who continue to evolve at an astonishing pace.
Do what you want according to your desires
First let's start by taking a look back at the time it took to get from the release of your second album, "Crazy for OKAMOTO'S," last November, to your first single, "Shout Your Desire!!!!"
Okamoto Reiji (drums): We had a lot of firsts, didn't we?
Okamoto Kouki (guitar): Since Hama joined, we had our first one-man tour in Tokyo, Nagoya, and Osaka that December.
Okamoto Shou (vocals): After that we left on our first long national tour. At the same time we were also always thinking about our next album. Then we were contacted by the Taro Okamoto foundation. They said that 2011 was his 100th birthday, so we should definitely do something together.
Wow!
Shou: At first I thought they were going to say, "Please change your name." (laughs)
Hama Okamoto (bass): That's not even necessarily a joke. Little by little we've been getting more and more exposure, so we were prepared, like, "Ah, so I wonder if that time has come…" At first they said we should at least meet, so we went to the Taro Okamoto Memorial Museum in Aoyama. We got to see where Taro himself lived, and talked with the foundation.
Reiji: That space is generally a private residence that people other than his family can't get into, and all the chairs and the desk there were handmade by Taro.
Shou: Yeah, and the fridge was painted blue.
Reiji: Well that was apparently a paint job he special ordered from the manufacturer (laughs). I guess he said to them, "Why should a refridgerator have to be white?!"
That sounds like something he would say (laughs).
Shou: Then they said, "We're so happy that young people like you guys respect Taro Okamoto. Let's definitely do something together." Since there was going to be an event on February 26 (Taro's birthday) at the Roppongi Hills Arena called Taro100 Festival, they wanted us to perform there, and then also asked if we would make one song for him. The result is that we started working on the album from there.
But writing a song dedicated to Taro is quite a task!
Shou: Yeah, it is. At the time we had a really hard time figuring out what type of song we should write. Then we looked at his work―all four of us went to see Tower of the Sun and felt that it really about "desire." We felt it from his famous quote "Art is Explosion," too, the idea that we should just do what we want according to our desires. So then we had a basic idea for the song, but something was still missing. But the moment we added the "Yay yay yay yay! Boom BOOM!" shouts in the beginning, everything fit perfectly. With that, development went smoothly, and after we finished this song we thought to make the theme of the whole album "desire."
I have this feeling that "desire" has sort of a negative image right now…
How did you guys seize on the the word "desire?"
Shou: I've been thinking that lately there are a lot of people who are not being faithful to their desires. Desire is an impulse really close to instinct, right? You could alway say it's your core. I think it's naturally, a "Don't think, feel" kind of thing.
Reiji: To be frank, it's like a feeling of proceeding from the source.
That's the truth.
Reiji: Yeah, honest. Laying it all bare, that kind of image. So we decided we wanted to make the album really honest, too.
Hama: I have the feeling that "desire" as a word has sort of a negative image in today's society…
Kouki: Ah yeah, might be true.
Perhaps especially after the earthquake that is the case.
Hama: Yeah. It might be weird to say that BECAUSE of that it's a word we dared to want to use, but we thought hey we're the OKAMOTO's so we can just use the meaning as it is.
Kouki, what kind of image were you trying to create with "Shout your desire!!!!"?
Kouki: Well, it's true that I wrote the base, but a great part of the song we built up during sessions. We wrote it concurrently with this year's spring tour, so our live vibe and performance energy gradually improved, which was reflected in our sessions as well. With this song, I think our style of completing songs as a band is perfected.
Were you able to get feedback on your work on your tour? [highly paraphrased :(]
Kouki: I really think so. But it's not the case that we've been trying to play for a long time on the stage every night. Up to this point it'd often the pattern that we'd play for people who don't know us and be surprised, but the people who came to our tour, conversely did know us. The challenge of how to overcome their expectations is what we tried to focus on in our training.
The feeling of opening a new door for the OKAMOTO'S
"Shout Your Desire!!!!" is a song that really probes that essence of rock and roll the OKAMOTO'S play, but the song it's paired with, "Future Eve" kind of falls under the pop genre with it's wild yet rich sound. I think it's also a really great song.
Shou: Yeah, the impetus for this song was the earthquake. Ever since last May when 10's was released time was flying by, but it came to a halt on 3/11. Along the tour two shows were post-poned, and if you include event performances, that makes a total of five. There were a lot of things we thought about, that first time we stopped to take a look around. If it were me last year, at a time like this I would have had the view that even if we did something, music wouldn't make a difference, but this year I realized there would be people out there who would understand. I honestly thought we could give people courage and hope through music.
So it's because of those thoughts that the lyrics have such a strong message.
Shou: Yeah. It's a song about how if you change the future, the past will also change, so you should try with all your might. I actually feel that when we finished this song, we opened a new door as the OKAMOTO'S.
Out of all your songs so far, this one is the most consciously directed at the listener. I think maybe that's where the pop part of the band is derived from, but…
Shou: I think that's right. This is the the last song finished for the album, but even if you listen to the other songs, there are more pop songs than the when we made 10's.
Like "Hello, I Love You."
Shou: Yeah. The feeling that, "Hey, there are these kinds of pop songs, too," has gotten pretty strong. Sure there are songs where the mindset may not come across, and it's just cool, but there are songs where the mindset really has to be conveyed; for those cases I think it's important to use a pop melody. It's not that you make it pop to pander, but that you use pop to convey the message. "Future Eve" is one where we really wanted the meaning to come across, so we pursued the pop feeling harder, but on the other hand I think we might play the interlude parts of this song with more passion than any of the other ones. That must be our desire.
Without a doubt.
Hama: "Future Eve" was positioned as the last song on the album, but I think it's a song made in the perfect form of our pop style. There are other pop songs on the album, but I think anyone who listens to this song will be able to see its stand-out strength.
Kouki: Even though it's a pop song, our essence comes out. Even more than putting catchy elements and avant garde elements into one song, we were charmed by seeing how interesting of a song we could make by mixing these elements. "Future Eve" is exactly that kind of song.
Reiji: I think we changed, too. Before, there were times where we had this tension that we thought we might bust out laughing while playing pop songs, but now there's nothing at all like that. Personally, I've been getting into BOOWY lately―I think my taste has really changed.
Huh, getting into BOOWY!
Reiji: Honestly, I didn't have any interest in them before, but just lately I started thinking they are really good. I couldn't imagine thinking that a year ago. In just one year my taste has changed this much, it must be that my sense are evolving as well.
When you say it like that, it probably means you'll keep on changing and evolving right?
Reiji: Yeah, but, for instance, it's not like since I started liking Boowy I started hating other songs. More like it's interesting how my tastes are expanding.
The OKAMOTO's in particular were exploring pretty deep places, musically, from the beginning, so there might be lots of room to expand.
Reiji: Yeah, I'm in touch with that deep place, so even while listening to Boowy I can enjoy noticing the point like "Whoa! They're putting in tons of essence!!!" That's huge.
Inspiration & Respect
With the songs on this album like the one Hama wrote "Hama Okamoto's Free Time" and the one Reiji did the lyrics for, "What sound would that girl make if I used her?", the band members' individual characters and musical ideas are becoming more distinct than previously.
Hama: We're pretty excited about coming up with stuff as a band and proposing it. In this album we weren't able to include them, but for instance, there are quite a few songs that Reiji wrote.
Reiji: That's right, like some ska songs.
Really? I want to listen!
Hama: As a band, the times that we've been able to really move each other have increased. Personally, I was able to do the "Casablanca Dandy" (by Kenji Sawada) sound direction. Our recording techniques and skills keep getting better, so we can freely take on these challenges in a relaxed mood.
Hama, what kind of image were you going for with "Hama Okamoto's Free Time?"
Hama: Well, there wasn't really a specific decision around it. At first I was just playing around with riffs, but then I realized it had become one song. When it came time to think about what to name the song, well, there's this album collaboration album I love by Norah Jones, "…FEATURING NORAH JONES." The Japanese title of that album is "Norah Jone's Free Time." (laughs)
Ahahahaha.
Hama: I was inspired by that (laughs). I thought it went well with the feel of the song.
Speaking of title inspiration, Reiji's song, "What sound would that girl make if I used her?" is kinda paying respects to Yasuyuki Okamura, right?
Reiji: Yeah, that's right. But the one who proposed that title was actually Hama!
Hama: I figured it was important to give it a title that would make it clear that Reiji wrote it. The other songs' titles are also pretty strong.
I guess you could call it a love song about personified drums.
Hama: Yeah, it's because it's a love song, and since you could basically call Reiji an Okamura maniac, that I came up with the title. "If I decided that girl is a long shot, what face would she make?" is a pretty famous song, so I guess you could say we're kind of riding the wave? Or timing wise, you might say it's like a celebration of the revival maybe.
Reiji: Plus the album's release date is September 7th, right? Isn't that the same day as the opening show of Okamura's revival tour? Awwwwesome!
OKAMOTO'S' desire
Earlier we heard about "Casablanca Dandy" from Hama by chance, but this time there are some pretty strong cover choices, right?
Hama: "Casablanca Dandy" is a pretty high bar, but I was thinking it would be a good look for Shou, including his mannerisms and character. And then, the challenge of covering the Takayuki Inoue Band, the question of how far we can take covers in our style. For instance, the time Shou wanted to challenge Julie, us other three's performance skills were clearly tested. So we tackled this song while remembering the thrill of that challenge.
I think it turned out to be a really good cover, and that fighting spirit is great.
Reiji: The bar for "Give It Away" (by the Red Hot Chili Peppers) was similarly high.
It's a perfect copy (laughs).
Kouki: So there's a guitar solo in that song, right? Well in the original one, they reversed the playback, but we reversed the reversed playback―I played the original by ear and then we reversed it in the recording (laughs).
Reiji: That mysterious "pyuu gikogikogiko" noise in the outro took us about three hours to reproduce (laughs).
(laughs) Persisting with this fetish-like thoroughness must be that OKAMOTO'S "desire" again, huh.
Hama: For real! Doing a Red Chili's cover seems to fit us well, so we're bragging about it more than others. There's an un-mic'd version of "Pump It Up" (by Elvis Costello) on there, too (laughs). I think it's obvious how much fun we were having.
When we interviewed you guys previously we asked the question, "Why did you guys, who have such deep knowledge of various types of music, end up deciding to do rock 'n roll?" Your answer was, "Even now we don't have the intention of choosing rock 'n roll―we don't know what kind of music we'll be doing from here on out." Is that still how you are thinking about it?
Reiji: Hmm.
Kouki: For example, if we were to say definitively, "We play rock 'n roll," then we'd feel kind of tied down. We want to keep adopting whatever we think sounds interesting and hold on to that feeling that we could be anything.
Hama; If we had slapped that label on this album, we wouldn't have ended up with the track list we did (laughs).
For sure. (laughs)
Kouki: Yeah. I think people understand that we are a band that doesn't want to be tied down to any one style.
Reiji: We feel like there is nothing but possibilities up ahead, too, so we're excited to see what happens next.
What do you want to accomplish going forward?
Shou: We want to get our music out to people who only listen now and then. How do we get to the point where those sorts of people who say, "That album 'Tommy' by THE WHO is cool!" would say that about us? We're also really focused on conquering the world, so how do we get there? And when you think of that, we've got this sensation of speed from putting out three albums in a little over a year, but I think from this album on there is seems to be some more delibrate work, too.
There is, yeah.
Kouki: Yeah.
Hama: I don't think our song writing pace will change, but in terms of how we're positioning the albums tactically, I think we want to take some more time to think about that.
Sunday, July 17, 2011
Midnight Ice Cream - OKAMOTO'S
In the middle of the night it visits me, an explosion I can't hold back [1]
Unbearable desire
My sweet sweet ice cream
Ah right now, ah right now
I'll crush these raging feelings to death, open the lid to see [2]
pink strawberry
I'm laughing
I'm forgetting that girl, but becoming a slave [3]
When I'm sunk into bed, melting from a fever [4]
I'll stuff my mouth so full
It's totally unbearable
It's a secret from mom and dad.
Midnight ice cream, in the middle of the night
Midnight ice cream, it's what I look forward to [5]
It's beckoning me again tonight
I'm bound hand and foot, won't come undone
I'm still ok. Let's keep going! [6]
Saturday, August 21, 2010
おやすみ君のこと ー OKAMOTO'S
When You're Asleep - OKAMOTO'S (.5)
The faintly tinted morning light, reddish, streams in
As always, morning is here
Let's just let it be over (1)
Before you open your eyes
I'm leaving
It'll end sometime, everyday before it ends (2)
I'm gonna leave quietly so as not to wake you up.
I hope I won't wake you up when you're sleeping
It's not that I'm running away, but
if it stays like this, I'll rot
I want to bounce back into the sky tomorrow (3)
That's my excuse and I'm sticking to it (4)
I'm gonna leave quietly so as not to wake you up.
I hope I won't wake you up when you're sleeping
Bells are ringing off in the distance
I'm hurrying home, such a rascal (5)
As always, morning is here
Let's just let it be over
Let's just let it be over
Let's just let it be over
Let's just let it be over
Let's just let it be over
(.5) Ahhhh this title is not easy to do. The meaning is clear, but the actual words to use in English are not.
(1) I really hope I got the grammar right on this ._.
(2) This part I thought about for a long time. I wonder if maybe it's an idiomatic form or something... It's almost poetic the way it is, but I'm not sure if it's correct. Sounds awkward...etc.
(3) "tomorrow's sky" sounds too weird. This sentence is still weird, because no one would say this in English. I guess I could just say, "I want to be free tomorrow" or "I want to fly back into the sky tomorrow."
(4) 踏みしめる is "to stand firmly" or "harden by treading" so I decided that meant that he's taking this excuse seriously and translated thusly. I dunno if it's right or not.
(5) I almost went with "jerk" :P but then didn't.
